Another flashback scene cut for flow – how Ilo really met Velto. Forgive any errors for this scene was excised and never made it past the first draft phase. =_=; Last year, Ilo Cux was named Prime Citizen of Ramaxia. Tuzaxi Hide Care presented her with a contract to be the face of…
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Deleted Scene: Episode Five
Anticipating ascension, Eppis Banto moves to protect her spouse, Ozbi, by forcing her other spouses into a bond break. She plans to do this by claiming huzkutx (a Femarctic form of impotence) and this requires a visit to a Genbluz. The purpose of the scene is two-fold: detail how sexual therapy works; show how intricate…
Deleted Scene: Episode One
I wrote this scene into the first draft before Ziw Balru appeared in the second draft review. After Balru departs, Sofita receives a mission assignment from Pitana Dag while lounging at the pool. The pair of hizaki are watched closely by three ‘breeders’ (a subak, a zaxir, and their zaxir daughter, Hako.) After Hako approaches…