Another flashback scene cut for flow – how Ilo really met Velto. Forgive any errors for this scene was excised and never made it past the first draft phase. =_=; Last year, Ilo Cux was named Prime Citizen of Ramaxia. Tuzaxi Hide Care presented her with a contract to be the face of…
Category: EPISODES
Deleted Scene: Episode Eight
This was a scene that worked when Femitokon ran in serial episodes at Patreon. We’d met Pitana Dag in Episode One and this felt like a natural progression to ending the first two arcs; unfortunately, it had no place in the novel structure of Tactical Pursuits as its narrative involved Eppis, Koba, Sofita, Ilo and…
Deleted Scenes: Episode Seven
This was a flashback to Ilo’s second meeting with Velto – the one alluded to in Episode One that Ilo recalls as their first meeting. It didn’t fit into Episode Seven like I hoped and thus didn’t make it to the second draft. (Warning: First Draft – not as polished as I would like…) Deleted…